Pmd Evolution | | Chapter 1

His voice didn't come out as words. It was a sharp, yapping bark.

From the shadows of the oversized mushrooms, a group of Rattata emerged. But they weren't normal. Their fur was matted with crystalline shards, and their eyes glowed with a frantic, digital red light. They were "Corrupted"—entities caught in a mid-evolution state that never finished. PMD Evolution | Chapter 1

"You aren't from here, are you?" Ember asked, floating closer. His voice didn't come out as words

Caleb felt a surge of heat in his chest. As a human, he had studied Aura; as a Riolu, he was Aura. But they weren't normal

Caleb looked toward the horizon, where a massive, jagged tower of crystal pierced the clouds. That was the source of the glitches. That was where his team would be—if any of them survived the jump.

"They're hungry for Aura," Ember whispered, backing away. "And you’re glowing like a lighthouse." Power Manifested

Should the tone stay or become more mystery-heavy ?