A killer first sentence is a handshake that refuses to let go.
: Constantly revise for Clarity , Concision , and Coherence . 3. Build "Killer" Characters and Plot
: Replace weak "verb + adverb" combos. Instead of saying someone "said crossly," use "demanded" or "thundered".
A killer first sentence is a handshake that refuses to let go.
: Constantly revise for Clarity , Concision , and Coherence . 3. Build "Killer" Characters and Plot
: Replace weak "verb + adverb" combos. Instead of saying someone "said crossly," use "demanded" or "thundered".