If you are looking for a of a specific piece of writing, an art portfolio, or a character design, please share the details of the draft. To give you a helpful review, I would need to know:
"Drawn shemale" likely refers to digital or hand-drawn artwork (often in anime, manga, or comic styles) featuring trans-feminine characters or "futanari" (a specific trope in erotic art).
Is this for an adult-oriented (NSFW) audience or a general narrative focused on trans representation? The Goal: General Tips for "Drafting" such Characters:
While "shemale" is a common search term in adult industries, it is widely considered a slur or derogatory when used to describe transgender people in real life. If your draft is for a story or a character intended to be respectful, consider using terms like "trans woman" or "non-binary character."
Is this for a comic, a short story, or a character sheet?
If this is a written draft, ensure the character has motivations beyond their physical appearance.
If the draft is visual, focus on balanced character design rather than over-emphasizing specific traits unless the genre (like specific manga tropes) calls for it.